Stephanie Lovett
"Every time she had a vision, two seconds later said vision would come to life. No time to help; not enough time to warn anyone. Splat: the cat is dead. Boom: the branch falls on her car. She was constantly under attack by judgmental glares and hushed whispers of her town, worsened by her extreme sleep-deprivation. All of this for a useless "power" she couldn't get rid of; Stephanie felt her prospects were bleak."
“Stephanie knew: Officer Wilkes wasn't looking for Mr. Evans killer, he was looking to quiet anyone who might know something about his dirty secret.”
“What Stephanie saw that night was absolutely terrifying. Not one, not two, but seven people were there when Mr. Evans was murdered.”
"Every time she had a vision, two seconds later said vision would come to life. No time to help; not enough time to warn anyone. Splat: the cat is dead. Boom: the branch falls on her car. She was constantly under attack by judgmental glares and hushed whispers of her town, worsened by her extreme sleep-deprivation. All of this for a useless "power" she couldn't get rid of; Stephanie felt her prospects were bleak."
“Stephanie knew: Officer Wilkes wasn't looking for Mr. Evans killer, he was looking to quiet anyone who might know something about his dirty secret.”
“What Stephanie saw that night was absolutely terrifying. Not one, not two, but seven people were there when Mr. Evans was murdered.”
- There’s a conspiracy involving the police threatening to Stephanie’s life. She’s from the city.
- Stephanie knows things but isn’t taken seriously because people think she’s crazy. Stephanie has some anxiety, she’s paranoid, she doesn’t have anyone to turn to.
- Are you going to try and solve Mr. Evans’ murder and bring the co conspirators to justice? If so, is there any way I could help? Do you have a way to protect yourself?
- I’d like to see someone try to help Stephanie in some way. I want to see Stephanie try to solve it.
Evelyn Faber
"She stepped over the cat, a few books, and some toys on the way to the kitchen. The apartment was a mess but she lacked the energy and time to clean it right the moment. She measured out the coffee grounds and water and turned on the coffee pot. She then went to wake up Jamie and Olivia so they would be awake by the time they had to leave for daycare."
"Then the taller police officer asked why she lives alone with her two kids, she knew it wasn’t a personal attack, but it felt like one. In response, she simply said, “He left me”."
What new insights, information,
development from blog 1 to blog 2? (Try to avoid plot answers.)
The loser husband left her. Seems friendly despite the hardships.
Identify conflicts/tension and has
it developed?
Trying to hold it all together.
Two questions you ask this
character if you sat and had coffee with him/her.
How did you land the job at the museum?
Suggest something for the next
blog.
As I suggested to Bret, your manager, you guys need to chat. Either you, Frankie or Bret needs to find a bloodied knife (or knives) and you've all got to figure out what to do next.
Jack Stars
"There you go, Mr. Evans," he whispered."
"There you go, Mr. Evans," he whispered."
Mr. Evans that is it.
Not a real clue as to who this character is. It’s very vague.
Peter Pan like. He is very nostalgic and considers himself to be very
intellectual
He wants to save people but can’t?
Who he is, and how he ended up living in a janitor’s closet on the
roof? Where did he come from?
Who are you?? Are you an actual star? Like the galaxy? God?
Allah?Are you meant to represent our lord and savior? Do you come in peace?
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