Meredith, Noah, Dorothy and Huncho

Meredith
"She pulls out a pack of cigarettes and a lighter, the wind extinguishing the flame several times before Meredith can manage to light the stick. Once the familiar warmth of smoke travels down to her lungs, she lets out a groan of relief."

“The dead man, they wanted to know about him” …”“What did you tell them?”

“Everything”


     2. Meredith’s son reveals that he knows about the dead man


     3. Now the audience knows that Meredith has information on the death of Mr.Evans


    4. Does your son have frequent nightmares? Why do you have dirty dishes on your floor?

Noah
"No such luck. It seemed that fate was not in the mood for listening to such trivial requests, especially at such an early hour, and the water continued on its path, now leading directly into the boy’s eye."
“The police left shortly after that, not bothering to ask the boy much about Mr. Evans. If they had stayed a bit longer, their small amount of detective skills may have picked up on the fact that Noah was hiding something. Or maybe not. Noah was good at hiding things. “

• Noah has information that he didn’t release to the police about the death of Mr. Evans
• The remaining conflict of Seth being present with Noah still occurs.
• What information do you know about the death of Mr. Evans?” “Did Seth have to do with anything with the murder?”
• I would like to know the development of Noah speaking on the information of the murder as well as revealing the past information of how his brother died.

Dorothy
"It wasn’t a setup she was used to and it didn’t have the natural lighting that being outside does, but this moment had character."
“Ever since her and her mom left New York, Dorothy always felt on edge, as if he would come and find them. He as in her father.”

• The audience learns that she is good with older people, she doesn’t like board games, , it's just her and her mom, she was from New York, and she is fearful of her father.
• She has an unresolved issue with her father that scares her
• Why did you move from New York to the Foxberry? Why are you so fearful of your father?
• Discuss why she moved to the Foxberry? What happened with her father?

Huncho
 “The raggedy, beat down, dark brown apartment building reminds him of his old man's house where unpleasant memories were made.”

1. Reader learns that Huncho had an unpleasant childhood, which could possibly contribute to the drinking problem that is introduced in Blog 1. Reader also learns that his childhood memories are what make Huncho resent the apartment, which is seen in Blog 1.
2. Conflict: drinking problem?
3. What happened to Hunch after his dad walked out on him? What is his day-to-day life like?
4. For the next blog, you write from about Huncho in current day, because the first two blogs were flashbacks. So in the next blog, you can talk about how these memories, which you talked about in the first two blogs, have affected who he is today.